Lucho: Solid statement, man! Concise and can be proven. It also shows that you've been paying attention in class. Please take a look at your grammar, specifically, subject-verb agreement at the beginning of the sentence, and possessives relating to 'ideas'. Be well.
Teen culture is affected by shoe companies in aspects as fashion, style and finally the behavior, making relation to indirect manipulation employing different media.
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ReplyDeleteAmerican teenagers have been studied by VIACOM and Apple Inc. in order to benefit their profits.
The influence by Pepsi’s publicity on teenagers' decisions.
ReplyDeleteDanny: Good statement. It can be proven; based on a theme; and a sentence.
ReplyDeleteJ.D.: What about Pepsi's influence? It's not a complete sentence. Please revise.
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American media imposes its own culture behavior.
ReplyDeleteMa Fe: What do you mean by culture behavior? Please clarify those two words, or that concept. Thanks for the post.
ReplyDeleteNike influence teenagers of US by manipulating them ideas as an individual with sports publicity.
ReplyDeleteLucho: Solid statement, man! Concise and can be proven. It also shows that you've been paying attention in class. Please take a look at your grammar, specifically, subject-verb agreement at the beginning of the sentence, and possessives relating to 'ideas'. Be well.
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ReplyDeleteCorporations such as MTV and Disney manipulate the young minds of teenagers and kids via publicity.
ReplyDeleteCoca-Cola uses publicity to control the teenage minds
ReplyDeleteThe media works in controling the teenager, being the the biggest and most important influence during their growth
ReplyDeleteMedia and fashion can lead a common US Teenagers to have unsafe sex.
ReplyDeleteUnited States citizens are easy malleable expendables of media channels, like Mtv and Vh1
ReplyDeleteCORPORATE PUBLICITY FROM TARGET AND WAL MART DEPARTMENT STORES, REFLECTS AMERICA'S CONSUMERISM AND CAPITALIST REALITY.
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ReplyDeleteMcDonald`s influences teenagers in the us with their publicity leading them to become compulsive buyers.
ReplyDeleteMcDonald's, Disney and Coca-cola sell lifestyles instead of products.
ReplyDeleteThesis: Corporations use publicity to try to make people think that buying their product is for their own good.
ReplyDeletePaola's thesis: American teenagers are influenced by corporations such as Mtv,Warner and Nike without noticing it.
ReplyDeleteDisney knows how to manipulate teenagers and kids by using created characters controlled by them.
ReplyDeletePublicity is the way of sell, consequences of it depends on what they want to reflect.
ReplyDeleteAlcohol trademarks are an important component in English society
ReplyDeletemedia and publicity influence the teenagers of the united states with the new and innovator fashion of adidas
ReplyDeleteTeen culture is affected by shoe companies in aspects as fashion, style and finally the behavior, making relation to indirect manipulation employing different media.
ReplyDeleteMajor trademarks such as Nike and McDonalds are producing several jobs that diminish life quality.
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